Fifty Shades of WT double F

How is this not the most blatant rip-off of Twilight EVER?

 

“The painful recollection of how I felt when Charlie Tango was sabotaged and Christian went missing—the hollow emptiness, the indescribable pain—keeps resurfacing; the memory nagging
me and gnawing at my heart.”

 

There you have the entire summary , plot and storyline  of “New Moon” . And in that book, at least the author had the decency to represent the hollow emptiness with loads of blank pages bearing nothing but the name of the month in which Bella felt empty!

 

 ‘’Keeping the smile fixed on my face, I try to repress it.’’

 

I’m confused here. Is it her face she’s repressing? Her smile? The memory?  Subject/object agreement is clearly for pussies!

 

“Were you watching me sleep?”

 

Yes, because he is a tortured vampire Edward Cullen A CREEP!

“Yes,” he says gazing at me steadily, studying me. “You were talking.”

 

Because EVEN THOUGH NOWHERE IN ANY OF THE BOOKS HAS IT BEEN MENTIONED THAT ANA TALKS IN HER SLEEP SHE IS A BETTER VAMPIRE THAN BELLA SWAN!

“Oh?” Shit! What was I saying?”

 

Going by the rest of your dialogue, AnaBella, probably “Jeez!”  and  “Double Crap!”